Narrative

My narrative took me a few days to write and it took a while to organize my ideas in my head. I thought a long time about what my topic should be and I decided that my experience of being a twin was the best topic that I could come up with. I decided that the best way to write my paper was to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of having a twin sister.I had multiple drafts and had to fix many mistakes. The visor center helped me a lot and my tutor gave me some very good ideas. It was very beneficial for me to go there. I think I would maybe use a different format and have a different point that i was trying to get across to my audience. There are not a lot of twins in the world so I thought my audience would think it would be interesting to see different experiences and what it is like to have a twin sister. I tried to be very descriptive and not leave anything out. I incorporated ethos by giving different specific examples and pathos by incorporating emotion and how i feel about my sister into my paper. I used kairos because I met and even went beyond the number of pages required and thought that my paper flowed well. I think my paper is good and I worked very hard on it. I am who I am and I wanted people to have a look into my life and see what shapes who I am.